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The beginning to one of my poems

December 21, 2007

I just thouht of this, how do you think the rest would sound?

How can you tell me I can see When I have no eyes?

How can you tell me I can walk When I have no legs?

How can you tell me we are together when we are miles apart?

How can you tell me you love me when you have no heart!

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    • Photo of LoyalWolf_SFH LoyalWolf_SFH
      LoyalWolf_SFH
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      Going To See Criss At The Luxor!
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      Posted 11 months ago by LoyalWolf_SFH

      i think you should continue with it, it's turning out great! you're a really good poet, but i'm sure you know that already =]

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      LoyalBeliever94
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      does anyone want to be a part of my project? please just write your name on my first blog :]
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      Posted 1 year ago by LoyalBeliever94

      hey thts good so far!!!!! but how come theyre all questions and exclamations?

    • Photo of Angel_of_Illusion Angel_of_Illusion
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      I need the community's help!!!
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      Posted 1 year ago by Angel_of_Illusion

      Keep writing! It's coming along great! It sounds like you are anxious and kind of mad at the same time. Can I ask if it is about Criss?